Beautiful are the flowers in the vase
Smiling to me from the table desk.
Through the window comes
The sweet song of birds.
With the eyes closed
I feel the heaven.
Angel has come
to the door.
© Yelling Rosa
19/10 –18
I have got help from Julian Morgan, the Yorkshire Author, to make the Latin verse right. Julian has studied and taught Latin for many years, most recently at the European School of Karlsruhe in Germany.
He has stepped down recently from classroom teaching and is beginning to rediscover his great love of his native Yorkshire. Please feel free to read more about Julian at: http://www.yorkshireauthor.com/about.html
Angelus ad ianuam venit
Flores pulchri in vase sunt
et vas super mensa est.
Trans fenestram aves parvae
carmen dulcem cantant.
Oculos quiete clausis
caelum tranquillum sentio.
Angelus ad ianuam venit.
© Yelling Rosa
19/10 –18
I got a little help from a couple of my Italian WordPress friends with the Italian verse. Its feeling and touch come close to Latin one. I tried to put the verb at the end of the line, but my friends pointed me in the right direction. It is always a matter of aesthetical taste how much dialect can be worked up. I dropped out ‘Vi sono’ from the beginning of the first line and 4th line is not a perfectly orthodox Italian, but kindly disposed to me.
L’angelo è venuto al cancello
Fiori bellissimi in un vaso
e il vaso è sul tavolo.
Attraverso la finestra arriva
una canzone dolce di uccellini.
Quando chiudo gli occhi,
sento la tranquillità del paradiso.
L’angelo è venuto al cancello.
© Yelling Rosa
19/10 –18
If you like to read this poem in Finnish, you’ll find it at: https://yrosa.wordpress.com/2018/10/21/enkeli-tullut-portille-on/
Oh my! To be able to write in Latin and translate into English. I marvel at your linguistic ability. I also marvel at the beauty of your poem. Yes, an angel came to your door, if by angel you mean one of the beauties of nature around us.
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Hi,
Thank you for commenting, but don’t count your chickens before they are hatched. I haven’t got a license from any of Latinists, but more or less I believe that the Latin version is all right. Lately, I have read professor Tuomo Pekkanen’s translation from Eino Leino’s Helkavirsiä, Carmina Sacra. He has used a very popular language. It encouraged me.
All the best to you and nice starting week 🙂
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Beautifully written… The feeling is extremely heartfelt.. 🙂
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Thank you very much 🙂
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that open door
appears so
welcoming 🙂
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Thank you very much 🙂
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This scene does sound like a slice of heaven!
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Thank you for commenting.
It’s a good place to be.
Have a nice starting week 🙂
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I wish you a nice week as well!
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Thank you 🙂
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Beautiful words….
“With the eyes closed
I feel the heaven”
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Thank you very much for the kind words.
Have a nice week 🙂
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Always my pleasure..
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Thank you 🙂
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sei veramente versatile nei tuoi post sempre ricchi di novità
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Grazie mille.
Tutto il meglio per te 👍
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Beautiful!
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Thank you very much.
I am happy that you like my post
Take care 👍❤️👍
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I love your words, their softness, we need more angels in our world. Thanks to be one of them.
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Thank you for your kind words.
I am only a scribe.
Take care ❤
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Nice poem
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Thank you very much 🙂
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